oh my ears...
ur ideea of a voice in the tut was great... BUT make it so it stops when u move to the next scene, because that is a big flaw.
anyway this didnt bring anything new and exciteing.
there are loads of tutorials on newgrounds... why make one like the others and not one that is original? or not original but that is detailed and very helpful to newcomers.
-=stick to animating !!=-